Saturday, January 23, 2010

I Was The Promise Breaker Comments

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my parents expect me to understand
they expect me to think its just about them
expect me to know its not my fault..
but honestly its all a lie they thought
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Audrey Marie Kay
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Joshua Whiting 23 January 2010

Nice poem. Good insight to love, commitment and child rearing. However, even 'mistake' children ought not assume guilt or succumb to self-pity on the psychological level. Keep creatively communicating. Check out my poem Acceptance - Love - Forgiveness. Stay positive!

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