Release the anger; start the beating.
I was the canvas you chose to paint red.
Break into me,
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Holy Cannoli! ! ! ! ! This another deep one... How do you think these things man? !
Oh my...Melissa, this was intense! ! ! I love it...so much emotion and pain. I love it.
1. i love the intense-ness u make 2. ur so intense in ur writing and so strong! ! 3. i love how u bash on that kid (i wont speak his name) 4. your words are so so meaningful! ! 5. this is absolutely amazing 6. and ur angel is so so so lucky to have u in his life! 7. bleeding on the floor raw really got me and i love the strength of the words.
This is a beautiful analogy. I love reading your stuff. It's so deep without being over the top.