I Was Sold Comments

terrible story, fantastically-told. and you are HOW old? ! well, some people are naturally-gifted, while others, like me, from the gutter, my poems, have lifted. i read your bio. i 'love' you, but i ALSO 'hate' you. if you were Siamese twins, the Devil would fete you! 666! ! *** - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - the number 666 is sometimes associated with the idea of the Devil/evil. i did a little online research just now and found nothing (as i quickly perused/scanned some paragraphs) saying 'devil/Devil'. there seem to be several interpretations of what 666 'means'. some also believe that the '666' mentioned in the book of Revelations, in the Bible, actually was 616 but was copied incorrectly as 666 when manuscripts were copied by hand. this poem shall go to MyPoemList. i'm glad it did not happen to YOU! (the poem's story) . humans cause 'chaos', but i blame God (who i don't believe in anymore!) for letting/causing? humans act as they do. let me read another of yours! bri :) thanks for the Poet's Notes! ! i'm glad you used money/again instead of spending 'too much' time reaching for a rhyme! ! ! but i 'love' the other rhymes. ;) i did not know this would be called an ABC form poem. i call it abab (with the one exception) BUT i am not a poem expert 'by a long shot'! ! ! !

I really love your poem. You are truly gifted.

good job, I really like your poem

job well done, good one