Wednesday, December 5, 2018

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I never forgot her gaze. How could I? I lost myself completely in its vastness for a long time.I stayed there with all the wonders she had seen.I stared at the stars in the nightsky that she tried to count with no success.I flew with all the colourful butterflies that were dancingin front of her during springtime. I smelled the flowers she gathered from her garden.All the angels she had ever dreamt were my companions.The sun, the moon, the rainbows and all the cosmos that she ever saw or imagined or thought about were the houses I dwelled.I could nevever forget her gaze.For I was, even just for a moment, a part of it.
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Kostas Lagos
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Mihaela Pirjol 06 December 2018

This poem goes in parallel with my poem '' Your Gaze ''; yours though has a dreamy beauty, a calmer tone, almost like a fairy tale. Lovely!

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Kostas Lagos 07 December 2018

Is there a better source of inspiration than a magnetic gaze? I'm happy thtat my poem resembles one of the best I read lately! Thank you Mihaela!

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2018

All the wonders she had seen! ! Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 07 December 2018

Love and art.Two of the great wonders of life! Thank you!

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