Thursday, February 22, 2024

I Was Just A Soldier Following Orders... Comments

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As I lay here, wounded and weak
my mind filled with regret and defeat
for I was just a soldier, following orders
but now I see, they were not righteous borders
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 February 2024

I concur with the Poet's thoughts expressed in the ultimate stanza that war only brings destruction. Yes, war must be abhorred in all its forms. Top Marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 February 2024

A meaningful, deeply poignant and touching poem. My heart always goes to every soldier who sacrifices his life for his country. He might be able to kill his enemy in times of war but his act is in accordance with the chain of command.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 February 2024

Asim this is brillant TFS

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Anjandev Roy 28 February 2024

......war's deceptive face...... excellent work....

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Nabakishore Dash 22 February 2024

A very heart touching poem.But feeling sorry and apologetic for having killed the innocents is the essence of your brilliant poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

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