I Was Innocent And Unknown Comments

a touching poem beautifully ended..10+++ The places we played and sung There trees of ache have grown My love was journey to death I was innocent and unknown

Oh my goodness, really beautiful :)

Wow that poems just heart stopping it is really one of the best poem i ever heard and i think that you could even be a great poet one day so if this poem is explaining you then stop yourself coz id like to see alot more poems out of you and definitely 10+ 4 dis marvellous write!

No doubt, nice and beautiful flow Thanks a lot for sharing 10+

Nice wording, beautiful flow. I enjoyed it very much. Please feel free to read and comment on my works. Thank you Rabbit