I Was In Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Was In



I was
Saturday,12th January 2019

I could never reveal
and feel
part of her
it happened never

Even though, we loved
spent time together and believed
we were meant to be for each other
and willingly came closer

nothing was missed
everything was pleased
yet something was not there
it always created fear

I was not loyal
at least as good individual
I honestly wanted to tell
but she landed no interest at all

Have I to die with heavy load?
what was then the safe road?
It was killing me from inside
I really wanted to confide

I was coward
and missed the words
I could have told her bluntly
I am sure she could have listened to it aptly

Hasmukh Mehta

I Was In
Friday, January 11, 2019
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 January 2019

Great composition, sir. Definitely love reading many more from you. MRIDUL CHAKRABORTY, Meerut, Jan 12,2019

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 January 2019

This poem reminds me of a certain period in my life when i acted like a coward in front of the love of my life. Really touching sir..! Akshay, cochin, Jan 12,2019

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 January 2019

Nicely penned.. Given the earlier times, Cowardice' in this aspect cannot be faulted.. Yet, the missed opportunity is well brought out. Rajeev Moothedath, Bangalore, Jan 13,2019

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