Wednesday, September 26, 2007

I Was, I Am And I Will Be Comments

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I was the girl at the terrace
Playing my guitar while I reminisce,
Tears were falling
But nobody seems to notice,
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Li'l One 27 September 2007

I've been at that place and you have really captured the feeling well.

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Marvin Brato 26 September 2007

Having someone inspired us to move on despite the fact that the person had not learned of our fascination for him is quite a passionate endearment Monica. True love does not expect to be loved in return; I still believe that loving is better than being loved because if you do not love the person loving you then you are not happy at all. Great write, highest mark.

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poetry lover 26 September 2007

Very lovely great write, I loved it.

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