Thursday, April 2, 2015

I Was Happy To See The Poor Thing Die… Comments

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I was happy to see the poor thing die
A natural death, thought the creature in question was a mere fly-
Had I seen it when it was buzzing and alive
I would have just swatted it without batting an eye.
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Rajesh Thankappan
fly
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Geetha Jayakumar 19 May 2015

A Beautiful poem on death of poor fly. Very true said, we don't know how many flies, living insects are trampled by our feet. Some, we might have killed also. Theme is quite different. I loved reading it.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 03 April 2015

Agree fully with Valsa-ji. You have looked at it differently (10) . There is a story about Sri Ramakrishna Paramahamsa. A disciple, who had to spend sleepless nights due to bug-bite approached the Master one day to ask him if it was permitted in his teachings to kill those insects. To his surprise, when he reached the Ashram, he found the Master busy killing bed-bugs!

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Valsa George 03 April 2015

A very sweet poem.... not the content, but the way you have looked at the death of the fly and the way you have handled the theme! Enjoyed! A 10

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