Thursday, January 5, 2006

I Was Going To Write You A Poem Comments

Rating: 4.0

to tell you how much
I love the cup of coffee
you bring me every morning
and the way you warm my icy feet
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Sheila Knowles
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... Sheila 19 April 2007

I don't understand why this poem didn't rate higher. I love it....but, instead of keeping it to yourself...I'd totally tell him, whether you think he's ready or not. Who on earth wouldn't be ready for such kind words. High marks from me! ! ! ! !

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Moya Levy 10 February 2006

I think this tells it all, lovely poem. Moyaxx

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Herbert Nehrlich1 05 January 2006

While this brought a flashback of the mid-sixties for me, when I had my first time in the great big USA and everyone was into Rod McKuen, the poem quickly got my attention. Very nicely done. Also the 'bring' out the trash is clever, hinting at your location. H

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Sheila....he's ready to hear them...or read them. Share this with him. Check out my 'Gusts of You' - kind of along the same lines...a new relationship...of uncharted territory for me. Hugs....and happy new year.

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Ernestine Northover 05 January 2006

Delightful Sheila, a lovely read and write. Very meaningful and warm. Love Ernestine XXX

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