I Was Dead Comments

Very expressive, it can suddenly grab attention of people... True feeling...

Super sir

Well expressed with death and life. Thank you poet.

Well expressed about death and life, Thank you Poet.

Possibly burn, bury and ashes Suddenly I heard someone shouting Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning If you want to know the truth I was sleeping. great write 10++++++++++++++++++

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wonderful! without aim man is dead and dead is life. a great symbol.

Really it is so nice l just like it

Loved your poem.. Beautifull expression on life and death. I guess you can publish a poem book.

We all are mortals with endless dreams to fulfil.Very often one may wonder what would happen to those unfinished works if he die suddenly ! ! This apprehension may appear like a dream when one is sleeping with such fears in mind..A nice poem, thanks for sharing.

We all go to such state everyday when we sleep. Nice expression of Sushpthy.

Having gone through a near death experience, I was naturally attracted to this poem. Although it was the opposite of what I had expected, it did not disappoint. In fact, it was great. Suspenseful. And very witty! Excellent write!

Well composed and nicely drafted with a tinge of humour. Thanks for sharing Kumar.

Beautiful poem on Life and death having stunning expression by means of a dream. The feeling of death and after it's condition have been painted cutely and touchingly. The reality comes after dream when a person wakes up. The last three lines reveal the truth. It may be quoted.......... Suddenly I heard someone shouting Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning If you want to know the truth I was sleeping. Fantastic dear Abhimanyu fantastic!

Nicely crafted poem full of great realization in small things.

nice poem man you may like my new poem be like water

Original with a great expression that brings the reader into your world with ease, great title!

A very interesting poem. Human subconscious can trigger peculiar images. A state of wakefulness reveals the reality.

Quite an interesting poem. Thanks for sharing it.

a good enjoyable poem. a nice read. a good drama