It brought me into tears
I remember vividly even though it is old by years
Many years before father has passed away
I had rushed from military base to home in any way
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Brilliant Robert UttleyLess than a minute ago Thank you for sharing you story. Comment +1 deepened experience
Anna Laurencio2 minutes ago your poem speak to us from the distance past with an immediacy that bring us to a deepened experience of the present. lovely, anna here Comment +1 Good
Leah Sharp2 minutes ago It has heart but still needs a little work it needs to rhyme throughout if you started it that way... Comment +1 ok
It brought me into tears I remember vividly even though it is old by years
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