Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, October 5, 2013

I Was Child Comments

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It brought me into tears
I remember vividly even though it is old by years
Many years before father has passed away
I had rushed from military base to home in any way
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

Merry Rich Rose and Nur Meiyati like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

Brilliant Robert UttleyLess than a minute ago Thank you for sharing you story. Comment +1 deepened experience

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

Anna Laurencio2 minutes ago your poem speak to us from the distance past with an immediacy that bring us to a deepened experience of the present. lovely, anna here Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

Leah Sharp2 minutes ago It has heart but still needs a little work it needs to rhyme throughout if you started it that way... Comment +1 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

malenky malenky2 minutes ago nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

It brought me into tears I remember vividly even though it is old by years

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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