Wednesday, April 1, 2009

I Was Born To Die That Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blankness over shadows the numbness

I was nearly touching the dark clouds
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Lee Howlett
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Carmen Johnson 01 April 2009

I like it alot.. Just wondering did you mean to write someone to breath..or did you mean to write someone to breathe? Breath is someones breath Breathe is the air you breathe.. But I really like it, just wondering about the translation of it..

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