! ! ! ! ! ! I Was Born Free...! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

it is a poem with a muscle, it is an emotion with solid muscle, two facets of teh poet's personality, one, teh first part, a tender, delicate, sacrificing all loving and caring all heart, , , , , and the other all mind, , a thinking mind, , a rational mind, , a mind in complete control and communion with divinity, , , the poem has its source from her heart, , not head :)

Mamtaji, Your fresh appointment with life is going to turn surely a new page, a new window to know yourself. Great poem

Women always say this and i remember my mom who works in actuary said this to my dad very often and that too ensuing after a difference in opiniions and a rift on any issue be it career or household chores or economical reasons as what happens as a crisis in most middle class indian families with me as an example and spectator from all this marvels. But yours are a unique.It sees of unison with God and a rest and retirement from all pleas and gleeful merriments like there in a conjugal relationship.It simply tells us that you relished all in that and have nothing more to reciprocate.I like solitariness and reticence as it stems good ideas and they are the building blocks of careers of what we are and what lead us flow through.Unfortunately am not yet in the parameters of a conjugal relationship and have not experienced a follow through..will be for sure in another decade to come and i serve as a your mouthpiece then.A wonderful effort madam from your side.I have voted it a maximum.

a very positive poem very well penned

Mamta, this one is a Wow, true spiprit forward under all circumstances, lovely thoughts by a lovely lady. Bob

Wow Mamta....I adore your spirit.....a truly great poem..Cheers Sandra

Blithe Spirit! Spring forth with the gush in the TOUCH of the DIVINITY to spread ITS FRAGRANCE into this world :) -shree

I understand your wish to have it your way. The motto of West Virginia is, 'Mountaineers are always free'. May you always have the courage of your convictions. Love, Sandra

the last line explains it all very well...in Divine company you ignore all ties and go free saving and depositing the bliss and peace you accumulate...good write...10

lovely attitude in that poem due to the divinity's presence....please read my; a spring'

Isn't it the desire of every one of us? ! The brave declare 'Born Free' Rest succumb to the sight of a bee. This is a very powerful expression Self, set at free, No tern back, Free Will... How much you would have crept to come so far So what...? ! Today you stand free. I wish you a shower of roses and roses and roses All the way ahead...