Wednesday, November 18, 2009

* I Was Born By The River Comments

Rating: 3.3

My scholar friend keeps his late Grandma's diary
And a certain page was highlighted in the color of yellow.
My old ferryman you never realized that how I deeply loved you?
Since in the cradle the word 'depth' I heard several occasions from my parents.
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Edward Kofi Louis 13 February 2016

To respect nature with the muse of your Birth. Thanks for sharing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 December 2014

really nice lines, Nimal and great bio, too

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Patti Masterman 07 February 2013

I like what you've done in this one.

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Makhosonke Dhlamini 25 January 2012

Excellent poem, life is deep than any mind of any great philosopher. Thak you for inviting me I will try to read all your poems.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 08 October 2011

i always think what we learn about the past especially if it concers us or a loved-one is significant and i smile as i read your poem it is nice

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Jim Troy 30 August 2011

You are really quite a poet...first time I've had the pleasure.... I love this poem and your style..... Nice to aquaint with your art............. Jim Troy

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Rekha Mandagere 24 February 2011

'The depth of life is more deeper than the depth of a river' beautifully comparison. Great!

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Lynn Glover 24 November 2010

Life has been described very nicely by this poem of yours. The thoughts I had during my read took me the depts of your river. Very good write.

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Maria Shipka 21 June 2010

'the nagging life is more deeper than the river.'...how deep truth have you described in this your poem!

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Nice, with Mother Earth hints... But 'more deeper' is a strange language for me.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 May 2010

The soul gets deeper!

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Kolawole Ajao 17 April 2010

Sound, deep, unique, well arranged free verse.

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Powerful picture of our mortality. Well done my friend.

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Powerful picture of our mortality. Well done my friend.

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John Oconnell 17 February 2010

hello again. very, very human. john

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Rose-marie Mitchell 11 February 2010

'This old vehicle stops at all railroad crossing' very nice!

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 31 January 2010

Your poem reminds me of Hermann Hesse 's Siddhartha where the river teaches Siddhartha the meaning of life and death. Fantastic idea. Loved to cherish and muse over it.

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Vinod Kumar 09 January 2010

Life starts from the water, says all saints, scientists, and scholors, thank you for sharing,10+

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Chris Mendros 24 December 2009

Evocative and revealing, somewhat of a memoir, progressing into the present. Worthy of its title, in my opinion.

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Akram Saqib 19 December 2009

a poem written in a fluent style with some memories cherished and loveable

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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