Sunday, August 17, 2014

I Was Beautiful Comments

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I was beautiful
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I was strong
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Emmanuel George Cefai
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Daniel Brick 17 August 2014

I rarely, rarely give suggestions to poets about their poems. There's something here at Poem Hunter, a bond we all share in finding the truth and beauty in each poem we read. There is an entirely different paradigm in a workshop where poets have signed up to improve their craft and intend to revise based on peer reviews. That model is NOT the Poem Hunter model. B-U-T forgive me for breaking my own rationale, but I would like to see a version of THIS THEME - I am beautiful - expressed positively, developed toward affirmation, treated as true! !

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Emmanuel George Cefai

Emmanuel George Cefai

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