Sunday, July 22, 2012

I Was Always Told Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was always told
I would never be anything in life
so when I made a start
I would always let it go
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Simone Inez Harriman 10 June 2017

After having a good laugh from your previous poems, I read this and just felt incredibly sad. Keep writing dear King. You have a lot to offer this sad world....10++++

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I never listened to people who told the lie 'You will never be anything in life' because such wishes are seals of dark hearts years will add take away in due measures... ***wrote a poem for you 'I Would Never Be Anything In Life' if you want to believe in it :)

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Heather Wilson 22 July 2012

A really heartfelt write, a brilliant poem, .... wear your crown with pride your majesty.

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Valerie Dohren 22 July 2012

Despair reflected in this King, but this is a familiar cry to many. Good positivity expressed though, and a determination to move on and make something of life. Very good write - you're coming along nicely! !

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