Tuesday, October 7, 2008

I Was A Fool... Comments

Rating: 5.0

you humiliated me infront of evrybody
and then you asked me to love you more,
i was fool to obey what u told me to,
but i truly loved you more.
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silent soul
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Mimzy Sue 07 October 2008

realistic and nice, you potray exactly what you want to say. so simple yet so very beautiful.... keep up the good works. i say 10

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Anoynomous Poet 07 October 2008

all comments are welcome...so plz do post ur comments..thnk u

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