Pallang Mofokeng

Pallang Mofokeng

Sterkspruit Eastern Cape South Africa
Tuesday, December 15, 2015

I Wanted To Tell Her Comments

Rating: 4.5

I wanted to tell her
But my words were stuck here and
There
Coz.Coz.
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Pallang Mofokeng
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Chinedu Dike 20 December 2015

I guess one has to tread with caution in trying to transform a platonic relationship into romantic one, since one runs the risk of distress that comes with rejection. A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Pallang. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2015

Love is not a decision; it either hit you or, leave you. So, try to tell her that you really love her. Nice work.

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Earnest Gatuma 15 December 2015

splendid.Very great indeed.I love it!

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Gajanan Mishra 15 December 2015

deep pit of love, thanks, I like it.

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Pallang Mofokeng

Pallang Mofokeng

Sterkspruit Eastern Cape South Africa
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