I wanted to call you mine
But you did not wish to be mine
I wanted to hold you
But you did not wish to be held
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You portray a true, one sided love so clearly, and perfectly. the tragedy of the uncontrollable emotion is really apparent. lovely work, keep posting
So beautiful... I almost cried. 'Beloved, I gave you all my love, I cannot just take it back' I know this feeling so well right now. Keep up the great work! Shannon
OMG I LOVE THIS POEM. This poem is one that descibels how i feel towards a girl at my school right now