Tuesday, July 24, 2007

I Wanted To Call You Mine Comments

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I wanted to call you mine
But you did not wish to be mine
I wanted to hold you
But you did not wish to be held
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Modupeola Williams
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Jc Verro 09 January 2008

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM. This poem is one that descibels how i feel towards a girl at my school right now

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Katharine O'Neal 13 December 2007

You portray a true, one sided love so clearly, and perfectly. the tragedy of the uncontrollable emotion is really apparent. lovely work, keep posting

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Shannon Nagel 23 September 2007

So beautiful... I almost cried. 'Beloved, I gave you all my love, I cannot just take it back' I know this feeling so well right now. Keep up the great work! Shannon

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