Wednesday, November 30, 2005

I Wanted To Be A Willow Tree Comments

Rating: 4.7

Tangled in the loving slender arms
I would knot the ends
To make a swing
Under my willow tree
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Wanda Swim Strunk
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Wanda Swim Strunk 05 May 2006

May 2006- This poem was the winner of the 33rd Annual Mississippi Valley Poetry Contest, the Mississippi Valley category, it is also nominated for the Grand Prize. It will be read along with the other category winners at the Butterworth Center in Moline, Illinois on May 20th when the grand prize will be determined. I'll let you know if it wins. Thank you to everyone at Poemhunter for the encouraging words.

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Barbara Schutz 03 December 2005

Did you read Czeslaw Milosz's lines: 'Not hat I want to be a god or a hero. Just to change into a tree, grow for ages, not hurt anyone.' Your poem reminded me of his goal, as did another poem in this month's Poetry magazine. Lovely. thanks! BFS

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Max Reif 30 November 2005

well told. I certainly feel the grief.

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