Friday, November 6, 2009

I Wanted So Much Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wanted so much
for you to love me.
I wanted so much
for you to care,
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David Harris
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Jean Dament 06 November 2009

A heartfelt, sad poem but well written expressing the loss well too. 'but it too late'-should be 'it's too late' & 'turn you back the clock'-'turn back the clock' ok Ravensong

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Tsira Goge 06 November 2009

it's so lovely poem..10.... Tsira

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Patti Masterman 06 November 2009

Bet she wishes she had made a different choice all those years before..life is full of lessons; some bitter, some sweet..(smile)

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Carol Gall 06 November 2009

once a long time ago good poem david 10

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David Harris

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