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Such an abundant God.5*****

Subjectivation of surrounding objects is equal to poetry and add pinch of exalted –true-viewed-vibe’ makes poetry great…and Sir here you made it… 10+hf Ms. Nivedita UK

soo cool. every word was perfect.

A true blessing of God. I think Its nature, the main creative force, that sprinkles poetry. I can say this poem a prelude to poetry. Deserves 10 as always the most of your poems, Kesav. Best Regards Naseer

a true feel before starting to write poems.......thanks for share...

Beauty is always enhanced when meshed with truth...as you have done with this poem. Will put this in my faves. Thanks!

my poems usually dont rhyme - but when i put a comment on your poems it rhymes and that is your magic- yet another magical picture- thank you and thank god-10

Speechless on this one. Magnificent!

A WONDERFUL POEM. NATURE IS THE INSPIRATION OF ALL POETS. ITS A GREAT TEACHER, Kesav very easy flowing write 10

wondeful poem so very apt

Nature is a great teacher!

Poetry can always be found in God's handiwork. Lovely, Kesav. Warmest regards, Sandra

A perfect reminder to me Of Robert Frost's lines... 'Life is tons of discipline. Your first discipline is your vocabulary; Then your grammar and your punctuation Then, in your exuberance and bounding energy You say you're going to add to that. Then you add Rhyme and meter. And your delight is in that power.” Started with a prayer for a Rhyme Squared with a wonderful Theme. It all sounds like a chime. I like it, i like it and i like it. A very good read. Thank you, dear poet.

yet another wonderful poem.. one can not think and then write.. the words get thr own flow.. i simply love the poem :)

precious... yes...usha, poets must be vigilant in ensuring protection to our this environment... what rest? what sleep? ...

A precious heap, of wonderful imagery too, is this. I like the juxtaposition of precious and heap... What one considers, sometimes trivial, and not really worthwhile, are sometimes the most precious! ! And of course, the closing stanza, that is a wonder in itself. Lucidly expressed, the job of a poet!

So many wonderful things around us, we poets should never be at a loss for something to write about, lovely imagery in this one, 10 Lynda x

A poet and his heart Can never rest or sleep I liked the above lines most. Nice verse.Liked it. Regards, Apurva

the enthralling imagery, simple diction, sweet rhyme has made it a complete poem... may we get more of such kind...