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in the first two stanzas the speaker(call the speaker you) seems to doubt that he/she/it can read you. but the last three stanzas seem to paint a different picture; they seem to assume nothing is hidden from him/her/it. i really liked the last three stanzas though i was sort of shocked to see a comma (punctuation! ! ! !) in the last line. i don't remember seeing a punctuation mark in the other poems i have read. :) bri

this is a very romantic piece good for you and me

Nice, straight to the subject.