I Want You To Feel Me Comments

pensive, contemplative...and then the burst of fullness bringing the message home... Wonderful build up and release. Well done.

at times we wonder to our loneliness- the feeling of in-tense drama of life. and that is meant to be part of our maturity in loving. nice poem that denotes the ongingness of love and its contrast as the letting go inorder to fill the love.

romantic one......well done

that is a beautiful one........ keep it up! ! ! :)

this is beautiful dear..ilike the way you create this piece..

Your lonliness is tangable...a great write 10.. regards Alf

after reading this, even a stone can feel ur sadness. words have their effect on a reader

Intense feelings very well penned. CP

excellent meditative lyric poem, very well expressed, touching........10+++++++++++

Feeling will come when the yarning will be in ‘US’ off of I or me. Nice one Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Invite you to read and comment: LINGERIE- IG [new post.] Enigmatic Navel or other poems Niv

very nice and lovely poem full of true emotions.

I enjoyed your love poem. Each word, each line seemed to come straight from the heart. In time you will heal, but keep on writing. A very good pliece. Lynn

A heartfelt poem crafted with skill and bringing intense emotions to the fore make for a stunning write. The last stanza is particularly heartfelt and I commend you for exposing your feelings and bringing the reader right into your piece. 10 Karin Anderson

an intense emotional write Sir!

well, this is so lovely piece of poetry romantic plus vivd ideas are there inside well penend at all luwi

Who is this 'she' who deserts such a smart sincere handsome 'he'? ! poignant and sad Deepen...words, poetically all cut to size sweet...thanks...10

yes i feel u, wonderful poem, well done ++10

a touching poem.very good write. voted10 surya

These sinking feelings explode during the lonely nights....deep pining multiplies, and the living and non living alike will ignite and flare up the emotions.... beautiful write! ! ! ! ! !

Visually wonderful I could see you standing out there in the dark cold night besceehing love to return to you.--10