I Want Water Comments
Just dont taste good.
Whats wrong-number one water.
So the rice grower, ' said'.
You maybe want more.
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I like your diversity with this one, using various techniques (1,1,1, - capitals, [[[ ]]]) . You paint the scene and successfully relate the action of this one-act play. I can hear the voices and see the gestures. Keep experimenting.
water is life...................and from life.......we live!
i love water festival...songkran in thailand. good write poewhit
An interesting write that can be open to interpretation All the best Love duncan X
Once again you amaze me with such bottomless stupidity....bravo
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7/28/2025 12:37:03 AM # 1.0.0
A poem floating on the deep waters of life and poetry.