Monday, August 17, 2009

I Want Us Back (Kinda Edited From 'Truly In Love') Comments

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I know that he loves me
And i love him too
But i don't think he truly knows how much
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Danielle Floyd
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Deborah Cromer 18 August 2009

Excellent description of what is felt. Love gives us a feeling that we ride from on the top! Nothing compares to how we feel when we are experiencing that feeling of perfection, until it ends. In most cases it does end, sorry to say. For those who have it and can always keep it, that is truly rare. Your poem tells the story of the good parts. Nice! DC

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