Saturday, November 7, 2009

I Want U Comments

Rating: 4.5

Ur my love, my soul my song
you are the only angel whom i want to belong,
i want umbrella of your hands, when sorrows shower me the rain,
i want to stay with you, in happiness or in pain.
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Shelly Shelly 10 November 2009

well well.. a very idealistic view presented here..esp in the lines 'i want to become your voice so that whenever u say, i will come with you, i want to become your sight, where ever you see, i can see with you' . such a devotion is very rare in practical life..but a brilliant poetry..

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Really good... A very silent poem...

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