I can't help wondering
if my life is one big joke.
Why must I feel so different?
Is it amusing to see me squirm in my own skin?
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Humans deserve more love than they're given, who can understand the cosmic reasons for this short coming?
Really love your work at the moment. I always seem to be able to relate to your words. This is a great poem. Kindest Regards Slim. x.
Dear Mary you are worthy of feeling real life.You ARE truly special anyone who has listened to your heart can hear something wonderful beating within.I am listening closely and I Love what I hear.Love Duncan
Well, if all this is asking too much, then I reckon another 6 billion people (myself included) are all in the same boat. Warm regards from another asker of too much (and unabashedly so) , Gina.
The acknowledgement of what you want is the first step, Mary. Keep going! Raynette
Passion has no shame, all love is deserved, embrace sadness and happiness as an emotional balance. Rusty
Lack of feeling is the bodies self preservation mechanism imo mary, hard to re-negotiate but love is the best fitting key! again imo. Great poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it and it relates to us all. The power of poetry? Wow....Smiling Tai
I think we are all stuck with inhibitions, Mary, if only we could just be ourselves, but society won't let us. Love Ernestine XXX
those all seem like very reasonable things to want, Mary. at least I think so, because I want them too. anyway, good poem.
Mary, you want what all of us want - only you dare to articulate it and better than most of us. avr
i thought you were already feeling all those beautiful things or is it just a picture in a picture frame? Nice one!
Damn it make's me look in me and see I could have so much more out of life Damn great read Superman