Thursday, February 23, 2006

I Want Too Much Comments

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I can't help wondering
if my life is one big joke.
Why must I feel so different?
Is it amusing to see me squirm in my own skin?
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Mary Nagy
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Kia Seales 07 March 2006

Damn it make's me look in me and see I could have so much more out of life Damn great read Superman

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Angelique' Rockwell 02 March 2006

my sentiments exactly!

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Uriah Hamilton 01 March 2006

Humans deserve more love than they're given, who can understand the cosmic reasons for this short coming?

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Herbert Nehrlich1 25 February 2006

I like it. It says much in few words. H

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Slimboydim . 23 February 2006

Really love your work at the moment. I always seem to be able to relate to your words. This is a great poem. Kindest Regards Slim. x.

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Duncan Wyllie 23 February 2006

Dear Mary you are worthy of feeling real life.You ARE truly special anyone who has listened to your heart can hear something wonderful beating within.I am listening closely and I Love what I hear.Love Duncan

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Gina Onyemaechi 23 February 2006

Well, if all this is asking too much, then I reckon another 6 billion people (myself included) are all in the same boat. Warm regards from another asker of too much (and unabashedly so) , Gina.

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Raynette Eitel 23 February 2006

The acknowledgement of what you want is the first step, Mary. Keep going! Raynette

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Rusty Daily 23 February 2006

Passion has no shame, all love is deserved, embrace sadness and happiness as an emotional balance. Rusty

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***** ********* 23 February 2006

Lack of feeling is the bodies self preservation mechanism imo mary, hard to re-negotiate but love is the best fitting key! again imo. Great poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it and it relates to us all. The power of poetry? Wow....Smiling Tai

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Ernestine Northover 23 February 2006

I think we are all stuck with inhibitions, Mary, if only we could just be ourselves, but society won't let us. Love Ernestine XXX

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Jackson Riley 23 February 2006

those all seem like very reasonable things to want, Mary. at least I think so, because I want them too. anyway, good poem.

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Alice Vedral Rivera 23 February 2006

Mary, you want what all of us want - only you dare to articulate it and better than most of us. avr

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Sylvia Chidi 23 February 2006

i thought you were already feeling all those beautiful things or is it just a picture in a picture frame? Nice one!

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