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pain and sorrow all too evident..............well penned

Tear for the rhymes I wrote With blood Love those lines. good job. Becca

This poem certainly expresses a lot of feelings and passion. Reminds me of the painting, The Scream.

A very hear breaking mournful poem.

another sad poem asif.... why? ? ? come out of this whirlwind of pain.face this life and get a hold of yourself. ride your life, don't let it ride you.... you can do it. try try again.

This poem seems to have done it well