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I want to walk with You, spend time with You
And talk about things closest to Our hearts,
My love for You and Your love for Me
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Susan, why should we walk when we can ride our horses? Seriously, this is a lovely poem. Extremely well written. Added to my favorites.
ovely piece Susan I hope the person you wrote it for loves it
Fabulous piece...... enjoyed it very much.....thank u, dear poetess....
Search My heart, strengthen My resolve, bless My endeavor Open My eyes that I might see You...loved this wonderful poetic expression. A lovely poem.
Susan this is right from the heart of someone who is drenched in love and faith and wants to live it like that. So realistic desires expressed to make life meaningful and glorious. Beautiful composition. In to my list.
Varsha, you have a very very very kind heart and I am so glad you share it with us! ! ! God bless you and keep you, my dear friend
My good friend, Soran, what important questions to ask - we should ask who? what? where? and how of every poem we read! Excellent skillful examination of a poem, Soran. Thank you for the 10 and so especially putting this on your fav list!
Aniruddha, Wow! Thank you for your critique on my poem! ! I am glad to hear your take on the refrain, it helps! !
I want to walk with You, to be Your handiwork created to do good things Search My heart, strengthen My resolve, bless My endeavor Open My eyes that I might see You In all the circumstances and possibilities of My life.
the big mystery of this great poem is that: it leaves the reader with a big question: who wants the poet to walk with? we know it is special walk, In all the circumstances and possibilities of her life. that is why we want to convey the poet in her walk, in kindness and mercy and love. have a big 10/10 and onto my fav list too excellent, brilliant poem ***
I will try to remember my comments---oh, yes, this poem concerns my heartfelt desire to walk with Jesus, the Shepherd of my soul! I wish I could also walk with a human who was even a quarter as kind
Thank you for all the times you give comments that help us writers encouragement, valuable insight, and friendship---you are a tremendous asset to PH, my friend
I want to walk with you, a poem on faith and love, and togetherness... Ah what a lovely poem, what lovely penmanship. The refrain 'I want to walk with you...' creates beautiful euphony.
thank you for your very lovely comment--it pleases me when people look under a poem's hood and tells me what they find that appeals to them--it is helpful to know
Every line depicts an affirmation of deep faith. " I want to walk with you, to be your handiwork created to do good things" . Beautiful lines from a great poem. Onto my Poem List.
I am so glad to hear that repetition worked! ! ! Thank you for putting my poem on your fav list that means a lot to me! ! ! God bless you, Rose Marie!
A powerful and moving write that fuels a reader to go with the wonderful thoughts of the great Poetess and impels one to walk with her too in her deep faith. The recurring lines, ''I want to walk with you" in each and every stanza convey a firm determination to walk with Him in deep faith making this marvelous write powerful.
Thank you Rose Marie for delving deep as you always do- that encourages me so very much. You make me feel that my time and effort was worthwhile in reaching out and touching another writer's heart and mind
do not want a narrow myopic view of life I want to walk the hugeness of life Together I want to walk Together in kindness and mercy and love.......touching expression with lofty theme. A brilliant poem nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10
I am sorry it took forever to reply. My e-mail decided that all messages from PoemHunter were scam and dumped them in the scam folder.. I was getting all weepy thinking no one liked me: (I should have known better! You would never desert a friend! ! ! ] Thank you, my friend, you give me such encouragement! !
I do not want a narrow myopic view of life I want to walk the hugeness of life Together I want to walk Together in kindness and mercy and love.........touching expression with a lofty theme. It is really a brilliant poem on faith and love nicely executed.
hi again! ! ! PH like your comment so much it doubled it! ! ! I think PH is very wise! ! ! ! !
Right Now! ! With the muse of the truth; To walk together. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
An amazing romantic poem, without any superficial sentimentality. I'd say that's how to write on love. Hope i write something inspired from your work.
Nosheen, your poetry is always inspired! Thank you once again for your encouragement.
I want to walk with You, to be Your handiwork created to do good things Search My heart, strengthen My resolve, bless My endeavor Open My eyes that I might see You In all the circumstances and possibilities of My life. . I want to walk with You.- - There is a resolve, there is a rhythm and there is tremendous faith in this poem.Beautiful! ! !
Bharati, Thank you for commenting on what you liked about this poem- that lets me know what appeals- especially what one of my fav writers says.
(2) You have given me inspiration for a new poem: 'I Want to Rock with You'. Get out the rocking chairs!