Wednesday, May 13, 2009

I Want To Trust Again Comments

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I can`t control my dieing heart i can`t see what to do
In my eyes our worlds are so far apart i just need you
I had a taste of you`re sweet love to me it felt so true
I feel i can`t live in this world when i am feeling so blue
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ashley roberts
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Chanelle Dobbs 25 May 2009

Absolutely an amaing poem...... you are well good doing poems....... so carry on writing more. Well Done! :)

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tara star 13 May 2009

its jst a outstanding poem....the wording is so great....the way u drived it..its so awesome............keep writng..well done

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