I want to tell you how I
feel when you turn away
from my tears
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This is such a true poem Mariana. I feel like this so much, i have loads to say and ask but i think that its safer for me to keep it bottled up.
I love this one! ! One of my favs from you! I understand the feeling and i can relate, I think thats why i like it so much! I have an x boyfriend who i wannted to tell how he made me feel sometimes and i couldnt because I feared the same thing, that he wouldnt understand. Great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -Meghan
Very wonderful! So amazing! You have a gift, a poem writing gift! ! Keep writing! ! Lilly
wow...i can so relate to this poem. i've been in this positon for quite some time, but its been really hard now. great job! your writing doesnt only benefits urself, but also those who cannot speat out, express what they feel on the inside. it's a God-given gift and u use it well. keep writing! ~Chani
wow this is really good, i can relate to a lot of things in this poem. Truly great work, keep it up!
I too want to tell you of a lovely lady who puts beautiful words to paper. Words I can certainly relate to. For many years I have not had the courage to express my feelings to a certain individual, I don't want to hurt that person in any way and as time goes on, I realize one day I will have to bury those feelings along with that person. Excellent poem---Melvina---
I wanna tell you a story about a young princess call Mariana who write with an exquisite pen and produces wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece my friend. David
Short precise, profound wording from you Mariana, very accomplished piece, Take care sweet-heart Love duncan X
Isn't poetry such a great outlet for our feelings? Keep writing... this one is great. p.s. reading the title made me think of the beatles' song - 'i want to tell you'. it's a good song, though. thanks :)