Sunday, June 6, 2021

I Want To Take A Pilgrimage Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to take a pilgrimage
to somewhere I have never been
or to somewhere I have ever been
it does not matter--it can be today or tomorrow or any age
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Susan Williams
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Smoky Hoss 27 March 2022

The dance of, and into, life! ! ! Beautiful!

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Ah, Smoky, you understand so well, my friend!

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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2022

Well articuated and nicely expressed thoughts and feelings.

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Thank you very much, Chinedu, your words are always dear to my heart

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Bharati Nayak 19 January 2022

I want to take my heart on a pilgrimage and show it the deep rolling ocean waves or the shimmering mountain river waves it does not matter--as long as it is not a cage.--Such a beautiful poem!

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

your response is as poetic as your heart, Bharati, and that is declaring you have a huge talented heart

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 January 2022

Loved the flow of your poem, dear friend Susan! A top score for the mesmerising pilgrimage....

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Thank you for reading my poems and encouraging me on!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 January 2022

I want to take my soul on a Pilgrimage......how wonderful! This is exactly what i have been thinking too!

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Chinedu Dike 25 December 2021

Great lines nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Happy Christmas my dear friend

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Rebecca Navarre 23 June 2021

Beautifully, beautifully, inspiring! .. Such emotion and feel captured in this! ... With such wonderful imagery! .. Definite 5 Stars! .. May your heart touch your dreams! ..

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Savita Tyagi 10 June 2021

Beautiful poem full with longings and nostalgia for life.

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Savita, may all your longings bear fruit!

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Jez Burl 07 June 2021

I will meet you halfway there mam Susan...Warm wishes.

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

I would be delighted, dear Jez! !

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M Asim Nehal 07 June 2021

Never thought a pilgrimage will be so intriguing, my spirit will soon be riding the land of purple sage.5******

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

My dear M Asim--- may your entire life be an intriguing pilgrimage

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Anjandev Roy 07 June 2021

Exceptional write......like it....thanks for sharing...

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Thank you, Anjandev for your encouragement

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 June 2021

How I want to do that Right now Bravo!

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

He, LeeAnn, may your dreams come true! ! !

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