I want to take a pilgrimage
to somewhere I have never been
or to somewhere I have ever been
it does not matter--it can be today or tomorrow or any age
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Thank you very much, Chinedu, your words are always dear to my heart
I want to take my heart on a pilgrimage and show it the deep rolling ocean waves or the shimmering mountain river waves it does not matter--as long as it is not a cage.--Such a beautiful poem!
your response is as poetic as your heart, Bharati, and that is declaring you have a huge talented heart
Loved the flow of your poem, dear friend Susan! A top score for the mesmerising pilgrimage....
I want to take my soul on a Pilgrimage......how wonderful! This is exactly what i have been thinking too!
Great lines nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Happy Christmas my dear friend
Beautifully, beautifully, inspiring! .. Such emotion and feel captured in this! ... With such wonderful imagery! .. Definite 5 Stars! .. May your heart touch your dreams! ..
Never thought a pilgrimage will be so intriguing, my spirit will soon be riding the land of purple sage.5******
The dance of, and into, life! ! ! Beautiful!
Ah, Smoky, you understand so well, my friend!