Monday, November 14, 2011

I Want To Sleep Comments

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My covers and I fight all night
I'm not sleeping well can't you tell
My restless mind can't unwind
Eyes are stubborn so I toss and turn
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Wilfred Mellers
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Jinal Oswal 14 November 2011

A good poem.. In the night, when we we cannot sleep.. the mind gathers all the negative things going around us with us.. loneliness takes toll... I liked it :)

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Dave Walker 14 November 2011

Like it. A great poem. Having no sleep is a killer. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Indian Brave.

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Wilfred Mellers

Wilfred Mellers

Kinston, Jamaica, West Indies
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