I Want To Run Comments

A very deep poem with many layers. the voice is the inner being... and so all you have to do is study its thought patterns to understand and tame it.

You have a nice mixture of rhyming and lack of rhyming. You bio is short and sweet. bri ;)

I give five stars. * * * * *

'I take it from it's core'.........use 'its', a simple mistake even I've made. Welcome to PH, young lady. ;)