Sunday, December 29, 2013

I Want To Propose You! Comments

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I really wanted to propose YOU! .....BUT…..

With a beautiful red rose in hand
Stood in a pose to propose,
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Amitava Sur 25 January 2014

Very interesting - the mind thinks to propose but seasons came and the went proposer still waits possibly for the right time but that never came yet. Should I say......... Open your heart opening your eyes and ears and cry out.... you will find some body of choice who will stand by you.

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Biju Benjamin 13 January 2014

This is the only one reason I never proposed anyone! stop waiting for right time.....just open up your heart! ! ! ! kollamm! ! ! ! Nice one! ! ! ! :)

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Hazel Durham 01 January 2014

A very interesting and funny poem with all the seasons so delighfully described in such a humorous way! Great write!

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Lyn Paul 31 December 2013

This is beautiful Geetha, thank you for the smiles. Time stood as a coffin, interesting line. Happy new year too!

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Kavya . 31 December 2013

a v hilarious poem.......every season is nicely portrayed in your lines..........

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 December 2013

Do not wait too long is the best advice. Thank you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 December 2013

Wow a fantastic poem creativ ways to show we shud propose before its too late i guess. But do ladies propose in yor culture dear?

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 December 2013

Hello Geetha. A very wonderful poem and fun to read. I enjoyed, Loyd

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Unwritten Soul 29 December 2013

Hahaha...this is sweet write also, i like how you end your write, Bollywood romantica there hahaha_Soul

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Geetha Jayakumar

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