Saturday, February 6, 2016

I Want To Play Comments

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I want to play
Like I used to when a napkin was as much a pant
As a pair of jeans
When there was still twilight in the west
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James Mallum
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Hazel Durham 22 February 2016

Very original James, I really enjoyed this beautiful write with inspired lines that paint so vividly your reflections!

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James Mallum 23 February 2016

Thank you. I would luv your comment on my poem SIMPLICITY. some people think it should have been longer and not a three-line stanza. I am still learning, your criticism is welcomed.

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Soul Watcher 06 February 2016

Well done James. Thanks for sharing

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Gajanan Mishra 06 February 2016

beautiful write, I like it, go on..

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