Friday, November 6, 2009

I Want To Paint You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to paint you.
Not to achieve immortality
For you or me
By the exquisiteness of your portrait.
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Hal Caufield
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Marieta Maglas 20 November 2009

wonderful similes ''How your eyes shine Like a pale Caribbean sea at sunrise; How your hair glimmers Like a breeze blown'' nice portrait 10

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it is comparable to Annabel lee. good good GOOD!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 06 November 2009

this one is really really good. It is very well expressed/narrated.

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Aly Reiss 06 November 2009

aww this is so cute! i love it!

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