girl when i saw you it blew my mind
a girl like you is hard to find
your beauty left my heart blind
i dont have the words to say
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just take my hand and trust ill give you lovin that will not rust... Awsome lines!
wow tht blew me away. if every guy thot like this there would be no such thing as a broken heart ahaha. keep writin yur very very good at it.
i want to love this piece coz this is nice and pretty it shows honesty and clear intentions this is expressive and impressive too all in all, 'i want to love you'..
beautiful feeling and poem..free your feelings more and more..let it soar...
the last para says it all. love is a fundamental feel. as long as things last as in the para, love renmains. voted10 surya
again, very nice poem. i can relate to this one and i feel like it describes my love for this person. great job!