I Want To Live Comments

I am glad to read a poem from your view side of life! it was brilliant to see how life is.... the way u write open up the window that closed for some people..keep writing friend and u will find that u words may heal the darkness to be brighter...Thanks for sharing

Watching a million different faces holding the same expression of indifference with vacant, emotionless.... ya devoid of all happiness.. taht is scene of the day.. nice composition.....10 read mine hand in hand

wooow, fascinating, powerful piece of writting sometimes we loose our way and don't have the sparkle of that reason, or the strength that keeps us going forward, all we have to do is get back to the start and remember what really matters thank you very much for sharing, keep up the good work

i just completely adore the way you slid the words together with honest meaning!