Monday, December 11, 2006

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Oh gritty mountains, I admire your determination
Always standing still
Be it a heavy rain or a strong wind
Be it a hot sunny day or a chilled dark night
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Kavitha Krishnamurthy
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Peter A. Crowther 23 December 2006

I like the feeling of fellowship with the universe and its elements in this nicely structured poem

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Catastrophe King 11 December 2006

YOU just DID! ! Keep writing..... you write well.... There is a touch of innocense in your compositions.

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