Friday, June 22, 2012

I Want To Kiss You: Comments

Rating: 4.5

I want to kiss your sweet lips,
To feel them against mine,
They look so deliciously sweet,
So delectable
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Sherry Painter
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Aslam khan 12 June 2018

lovefull:sweet and deliciously,slow and deep words

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Aslam khan 12 June 2018

lovefull:sweet and deliciously,slow and deep words

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Danny Katongo 28 February 2018

Add a comment. they are touching when leading we need more

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Maria Gonzalez 31 August 2015

Love this poem. The lines are sweet and sincere. Nice work! Thank you.

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Maria Gonzalez 31 August 2015

Love this poem. It's full of passion and very sweet lines. Nicely done!

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 August 2015

I want to kiss you, I want to kiss you sweet and slow, I want to kiss you deep and rough, I want to kiss you. such a human need in simple words potrayed gives the reader the desire to kiss. wonderful write. thank you dear Poetess.

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