Tuesday, July 23, 2013

I Want To Kill You Comments

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You pierced a dagger into my heart,
And step in from my life,
Like a wind which is vanished
So calmly after a storm,
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Jiji Mohandas
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Jazib Kamalvi 08 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Jiji. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Sekharan Pookkat 04 August 2013

Life is precious- do not think about killing anybody - Love life and live together- and convey the message of love especially a teacher can do it.

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Rupesh R.k Babu 26 July 2013

good, u portrayed it perfectly, keep on writing

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Maha Maya 23 July 2013

thank you so much geetha and gajanan for your valuable comments.

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 July 2013

Oh My God! ...Good write.....Enjoyed reading it...Thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 23 July 2013

wonderful presentation, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Jiji Mohandas

Jiji Mohandas

Thrissur, Kerala
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