Saturday, December 27, 2014

I Want To Hear You Comments

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I see you standing here in front of me, I see you speaking to me, your mouth is moving but I cant hear a sound coming from you lips, but I want to hear you.

No... Green smoke has been unleashed again. Thick and consuming, surrounding you, engulfing me. I reach out for you; I can no longer see you clearly. I am not letting you go, but I am beginning to slip, but I want to hear the words on your lips.
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Jeri Martindale
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 28 December 2014

Because I believe! life=destiny, no matter what falls down; I will always want to hear you. A beautifully composed poem Which communicates the feelings of heart.Well expressed. Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Jeri Martindale

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ElDorado, AR
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