Friday, April 5, 2019

I Want To Go Out Myself Comments

Rating: 3.9

I want to go out myself
From my eyes, breathe, thoughts...
And want to adjust there
With the untouched folks
...
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dipak adhya
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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 April 2020

Thought provoking poem in the backdrop of present situation. Hearty congratulations for the well deserved poem of the day.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 29 April 2020

A very thought provoking poem, keeping in mind the current Lockdown period. It's natural to feel the urge to get out of home, to 'want to go out.' Congratulations on being poet of the day.

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Chinedu Dike 29 April 2020

An insightful bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 April 2020

Can be classified as one of the great poems of the recent times. Like to read again and again. Congrats.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 April 2020

A pragmatic philosophical poem......10+++

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Rajnish Manga 29 April 2020

A nice poem with a philosophical touch and utopian dream. Not impossible to realise. Thanks.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 April 2020

yeah have to go out from the obsession love on self have to sing the song of youthfulness have to the victorious sun at this age/// congrats for being selected this beautiful poem as POD

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Keith Brown 29 April 2020

To go out myself and see ourselves as others do, seek love without the confines of. The flesh A fascinating journey. Kb

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Sasikala Kamandula 29 April 2020

Beautiful poem with keen and deep concept dipak Loved to read.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 April 2019

A wonderful introspective poetic expression. Heartiest congratulations on poem of the Day.

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Prabir Gayen 29 April 2019

From my side 1000000000+++++++++ thanks

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Prabir Gayen 29 April 2019

I want to go out myself And I must go If you forbid me Let say them so: Not to love from heart And to be practical... ...deserved to be poem of the day..

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Prabir Gayen 29 April 2019

I'm certain that there is implicit Pure love and passion Adoration for a heart That does not know wealth and pedigree Not what in future may be... .... fantastic poem.....

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Prabir Gayen 29 April 2019

I want to go out myself From my eyes, breathe, thoughts... And want to adjust there With the untouched folks... .....very good poem...

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 April 2019

Muse! ! Pure love and passion. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Savita Tyagi 29 April 2019

We all are permitted to take flights of imagination, a longing simply coming from heart is well expressed in this poem. Congratulations!

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Mohabeer Beeharry 29 April 2019

How lovely is this write, so full of wistfulness and beauty, and eyes on a world you only know. Mohabeer Beeharry

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dipak adhya 29 April 2019

this really doesnt make any sense, does it? Sorry.

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dipak adhya 29 April 2019

Wow, as I reread this I see that I made plent of mistakes. This relly dint deserve to be poem of the day!

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dipak adhya 29 April 2019

This is the bestest poem ever. Congradulations on member poem of the day!

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