I Want To Go And Run And Bound. Comments

would stand proud and survey all this beauty, My Antlers standing pointed and proud, Hark a shot rings out it is all gone, lovley write with beautiful feeling inisde... i liked it so much.. r read mine// blame me, , i am novice and unnatural act

This was good to read, but I am a rhythm and rhyme poet. There were places here where I expected a rhyme but didn't find it. That always bothers me a little. Anyway, the reading did flow in places and the story was wonderful. Something I think about every hunting season. GW62