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Sad but beautiful feelings expressed, through the eyes of those who suffer and feel that no one loves them. Depressed thoughts of suicide bring sadness, but this poem is well crafted with raw emotions. Thank you for sharing.

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This poem is absolutely touching.... like it. Well articulated

A poem which moved my stream of emotions. Nicely written and reflects that hopeless times when one wishes death smiles at him.

So much to think about in this poem. Sadness is my first thought because it is only in death that one feels the passion and love from others. The hope would be to feel that love and emotion during life for a peaceful existence. Yes, sad but written with such thought and emotion. A great write!

So deeply moved by your poem,Mr.Wahab! Its exactly what i occasionally feel but soon recover my grief! May you find happiness!

A poignant and an expressive write. hope you find happiness in your life.

Thoughts of death wander in one's mind.A good description of thoughts.

Written by a true poet. Thank you, Abdul

shades of emily dickinson here......yes it wud b great to knw if we were cherished by our loved ones.......after death

It is a good emotional penning of knowing the value by ending oneself? Then does not prove a hypocrite society who so long did not value a life till the end and at least shedding tears to recognize? ?

Interesting perspective of something that sometimes it's very hard to describe since we only can see one side of the coin... Well written! :)

death description is good but death is sad.

it's funny and lovely and deadly. good work Abdul

I don't in what context you wrote this.. the poem is good actually awesome but the concept is scary

Well crafted, Dark Blanca Prior598 days ago Given the reality of the times this is a bit depressing, however I feel it brings light to the fact that individuals that commit suicide aren't aware of how much love and support they have because everyone waits until that person is dead to express their true emotions. Although very dark it calls to a positive realization... that you don't know what you have until you lose it.

well wriiten Andrew Hozempa598 days ago this poem is well writen and I find I feel a heavy heart with reading it, but still feel a smile as you can sense his feelings in the words

I love this! Regenna Hairston-Grier598 days ago This poem reminds me of my childhood in a segregated south, and the very day the carrier brought the news that my fathers oldest Son was killed in Vietnam.... Very well express!

intense Dara Bruce598 days ago its almost as if you wrote this from beyond the grave, i can tell you do not fear death but welcom ite

Great Marwand Bahand595 days ago A five star poetry writer. A heart touching poem which feeds your soul