Tuesday, June 11, 2013

“i Want To Breathe You” Comments

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I want to get lost in your eyes
The windows to your soul
Of a depth untold
The deeper I fall inside your soul
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persian khushi
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The title saving the rest of the poem is fantastic.. The title will be 'I Want to Breathe'....kindly do the correction.. nice poem in theme Your passionate feelings revealed.. Dr.Ratan Bhattacharjee

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Ramesh Rai 27 June 2013

beautiful write. xlent.10 ++++

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