Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Sunday, May 27, 2012

I Want To Be Your Dream-Boy Comments

Rating: 4.5

I want to be your dream-boy, my jaan
You can fill my life with joy, my jaan

I don't want to live like this, my jaan
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Asif Andalib
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Adela Myers 14 June 2012

I love it! its amazing i think your a really good writter :) KEEP IT UP! ! !

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Ohood Al.shabibi 07 June 2012

nice keep it up! ! strong feelings

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Nana Kwame Nketsiah 06 June 2012

Great poem, nice rythmm. Could u consider reading my poemMY TEARS FLOW, BUT I SHOVE IT OFF

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Autumn Winds 05 June 2012

I like this poem, I think it's cute. I thinks it's just the right size and the rhyming is good.

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Sarah Windley 05 June 2012

it was cool, i like how it rhymed

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Sameera Sameer 05 June 2012

that was good... keep it up...9/10

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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